All Comments on 'Sweet Surrender Ch. 03'

Shit is about to hit the fan with Barbie!!!

I love your story I really relate to your Emmie. i like how you eluded to her emotional baggage, i did want to read better descriptions of her actual baggage but i'm a guy. all the praise you've recieved is great, your editing improved keep it up ... your story is so great i'm looking forward to seeing all the future details kids their jobs and family maybe a bit with cassie and tim ...

Personally as a BBW I've been very much happy to read this series..and hope you finish it really soon. Hopefully I will find the RIGHT military man for me, and no more of the WRONG military men!!!!!!

HURRY & FINISH THIS PLEASE!!!!

Please I need more of this story it makes me so happy to read which is stupid but it makes me believe I can find the military man of my dreams!

im loving this story its really getting fun ^^v

please continue with another chapter

A little editing would be good. There are several instances of "your" where it should be "you're", for example. Thru should be through in one or two places. But I just love the end where Bridezilla gets what's coming from Emmie -- he he he.

I am really enjoying yhis serial,so please get back to writing it as quickly as possible.

I am really enjoying yhis serial,so please get back to writing it as quickly as possible.

You really have to finish the story. I check every day for the next installment. I love their chemistry!