All Comments on 'Sweethearts'

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PacoFearPacoFearalmost 15 years ago
Bled chocolate syrup and cried gumdrops

I really like that turn of phrase. Hiya - I saw your comment on one of my stories and thought I'd peek in one of yours and return the favor. Keep up the good work. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
minus the love...

would have liked it more if you'd left out the "i love you's" at the end. just doesn't happen, even after a bonding experience like that.

lordchilworthlordchilworthabout 15 years ago
thanks

well writen, succinct and sexy

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