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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 12 years ago
There were disasters?

Perhaps I missed them. It appears perhaps having Saffron's father catching them in bed was embarrassing, but was it a disaster? Losing his job might have been bad, but gaining the patent to a portable Sybian ought to be a great benefit with large profits.

Good story, anyway. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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