All Comments on 'Sylvia and Holly'

Great story building. Very erotic and constructing a sensual situation. Top marks and many thanks.

Omg this story is SO good! God this did things to me lol.

The Dom theme was unpredicted from the last encounter with Holly - a nice surprise. I'm now wondering what a massage with both Jack and Holly would be like? Good work! Fun!

I think that its time for Sylvia to take another trip to see Holly!

Wonderful super-patient buildup had me poised and primed. Will it be left to our imaginations to complete the visit or is there a Part Two on the way? Whatever, I love your writing style and embrace of all things erotic.

Don't stop there! I love the build up but need it to go farther.

Thanks, by the way.