All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mother'

by rocket_man

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knickerlessalwaysknickerlessalwaysabout 15 years ago
Now what?

I suggest you stick with the mother. Jackie has the hots for you, but Sylvia let you down. If Sylvia wants you back she must accept that her mother has first claim now, unless she wants to partake in a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Stay

with themom...older women rule...Thay don't yell, they don't swell and they are grateful as hell......been there and done that......the mothers always seem to be the hottest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Title recognized

Good story line. Hope the next installment comes soon. It's also good to know that there's another "Dr. Hook" fan out there!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Don't Make Us Wait Long

very good story,you got my juices flowing. I'm 47 married and I had a very nice orgasm reading this story. Please, don't make us wait too long for the next chapter !!!! Joan @ The Jersey Shore

jiffin1jiffin1about 15 years ago
Dr Hook would be ... Proud??

Ple-ease, Mrs. Avery, I just gotta talk to her, I'll only keep her a while;

Please, Mrs. Avery, I just wanna tell her, Goodbye!

Not a bad take on a great song ...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
Well this could get complicated

Old boy friend fucking mom, and daughter shows up and wants some revenge sex on her husband. Will mom's heart get broken in the meantime, I'm sure mom wants that hard cock more than the daughter.He still has to find a way to save the hotel chain. Interesting. Thanks .....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good Effort

Hurry up with part 2, please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

very well written

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