All Comments on 'Sylvia's Switch Ch. 04'

more, more, more...

i'm not without criticism though... there are syntax, spelling and ommision errors... a good editor will pick up on these for you... i use hotti for my stories.. but the balnce of your tale is about right and it's definitely erotic. you are to be congratulated, well done.

hurting someone does not show how much you love them, it shows that you are their property and they can do whatever they want to you

Not into trannies and masochism or whatever they call it, but to each their own. But I tremendously support lesbian love.