All Comments on 'T-Shirt'

by savismith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Soooo sweet.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Truly, love is . . .

. . . aroused and showered with kisses. Tender and warm, with or without a T-shirt.

WillowxOCWillowxOCover 9 years ago
A very sweet short story

I really enjoyed this story. It was short, it was to the point, but it still evoked the feeling that these two characters loved each other a lot. The sexual descriptions were tender while still maintaining a sense of urgency. I can only find one instance where you're word choice wasn't stellar (You used grit when clench or some other word probably would have been better), but this was by far the exception and not the rule. A very nice read.

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I've been a writer since middle school. And since that time I've been published both in print and on the web. I've been honing my skills writing poetry and short stories. I'm always working on a novel of course, but I've just found this new genre - fan fiction. I'm using that...