All Comments on 'Tabby's Cousin'

LOVED THE STORY HOPE THERE IS A CHAPTER 2 AND 3 COMEING SOON.

well written and very hott! as are most of your stories,hope to see a continuation of this story soon. especially the mother/daughter theme.

Well-written an HOT! HOT! HOT!

I can't share the other reader's enthusiasm for this story. Overall it's written pretty well but the dialogue is bad. George Lucas in Starwars bad.

-S-

"...how would any hot blooded male not be able to resist that?""

Doesn't that mean, that he absolutely had no problems to resist? And the dialogues are so ridiculous that they sound like being taken out of a daily soap. Get a proof-reader.

I enjoyed reading it and it was well written.

That was erotic very, very,hot and fucking outstanding, WOW.

Forgive me I though we were on a porn site not a correct-other-peoples'-grammar site. That said it was HOT! And yes, the fact that it was well written was a pleasant change.

Tabby has the unluckiest cousin in the world, for being forced to have sex with the most unbearably disgusting college student in the world.

what is hot about watching a black whore fucking a white whore????????????????????????

Good build up, which could easily happen and a reasonable level of excitement.

The mother licking her daughter's pussy was a good touch too.

As for grammar, this is porn, so not too bad.,.but lack of editing held you back from 5*

Gave you 4* still, and enjoyed the energy of good incest.😊🙏😊