All Comments on 'Tabitha Ch. 01'

Oh the pride of ppl

Yup, am hooked. Proceed to chp 2 immediately now.

You write really well. Keep up the great work. Wes is extremely hot.

Wes, off she better be dying or something. Anything less is plain stupid. Who gives a man that rocks your world permission to see anyone else? She better dig her self out of this hole and do right by Wes....LOL

Love it already. Just don't take three or four months to update it...lol!!

I can already tell that this is gonna be one hot story. Keep up the good work and hopefully make longer chapters :)

not up to what it should of been by a long ways. you do better next time i knows.

Can't wait to see what happens next! Wes sounds adorable.

Soular

Short but hit just the right spot. More. Please. Soon... Lol Cat

great start, can't wait for more

More please, i really want to know more about wes and her relationship.

and loving this story MORE MORE!!