All Comments on 'Taboo: A Memoir Ch. 01-03'

Good, literate start. It will be interesting to see how the tale unfolds.

I enjoyed reading all of the background and life history, it gives me a good picture, in my mind, of who they are.

A nice pace and enjoyable to read, fast enough to keep me interested, but slow enough to let me think of what is taking place as I read the work.

Thanks for the good tale and hope to see more soon.

Now that they have consummated their sexual relation, I hope that there's going to be more intimate moments to read about them.

A very 'atmospheric' tale of a different time but with links to today too.

Very good and thank you.

Not sure why so many people insist on their characters getting stoned, but it is definitely a turn off. I didnt even read beyond the drug use on the first page.

Usually I find that the most "taboo" stories --- that is, the ones that are "hottest" or most believable --- are with the least sex in it. It is the true taboo nature, the INFREQUENT but highly anticipated sexual accounters which also fill the participants with moral, ethical, and personal guilt and all kinds of other real human feelings, which can not be easily controlled.... that make a story of this nature the most erotic. <p>

I almost never read taboo or "erotic" stories that start out with a penis as big as 15 inches see-sawing in and out of a vagina, with the woman screaming like she's a pig being killed, in TOTAL fakeness. <p>

Particularly if they are about multiple men and women having sex like common stray dogs, humping each other silly, pretending to be so erotic, so good, so enjoyable, etc., when it's all fake noises, like cheaply made bad porn movies, where a highly soiled, pimpled, highly blemished/diseased woman pretends to be enjoying large objects, including multple cocks, being shoved in and out of her various orifices... everyone knows (the "director", the porn "stars," the audience) is total nonsense, and no one cares but the women still pretend to argasm from beginning to end... <p>

Again, eroticism --- where as in LOLITA or any other form, in the more mainstream venue or here in Literotica --- of ALL KINDS are usually best and most erotic when they serve merely as the vehicle for a well developed relationship between two people who are NOT supposed to be doing those things but do them anyway, even if they feel they are going to be sent down to hell, to be with Satan... by the universe's most "loving" creator God, ad nauseam... <p>

Anyway, it LOOKS like this longer story --- harking back to the tumultuous 1960s --- could be a good, long, slow, and well developed story of two people who are not supposed to do what they purported to have done, living out a good productive life that only they really knew?

The Stones didn't tour the US in 1968 (hadn't been here since '66 because of drug charges in the UK). They toured beginning in late 1969. By then, Brian Jones was already dead, so I don't think he was singing anything. If you're going to set the scene, at least get the facts straight - it calls a your other "facts" into question.

He didn't tell us anything about his hopes and dreams, his childhood, his parents, grandparents, siblings or what he had for dinner. I feel shortchanged.

it makes you doubt anything that follows.

if you are going to take the time to set the stage, at least get the little things right.

so far the story is well told and interesting. and the sex was pretty good too!

Very lovely. I'm especially enjoying her crotch hair. Bush is so maternal, isn't it? Hairy mother crotch expresses Mother Nature's own mysterious modesty. Parting that veil is a son's greatest Earthly delight, when love conquers taboo and prodigal flesh reunites as a single symbiotic entity, consanguineous genitalia rutting and hunching together as mother and son snuggle and cuddle in a tradition going back to St. Eve and her son Adam, making love in the Garden.

I read your story, yes indeed the stones didn't tour in the US, in 68. But did start US tour in Fort Collins in November of 69...as far as Brian Jones, he died in 69, so the poster might what to get his facts straight..( fact checker my ass)