by Tom_Hathaway
It seems like Jacquot needs a lesson. After deserting his wife and son he turns up and tries to insinuate himself in their lives.
I know incest seems to be wrong and is illegal, but these flawed characters need the comfort therefrom.
Your style is breathtaking. The passion, the fear, the lust and the love come thru the pages, transporting the reader to the scene
you take a love story and turn it into BDSM, while throwing in an ex con jerk?
get back on track, please.
"rightbank" got it right in one respect, but sorry "rightbank, he wrote this 4 years before you commented and he doesn't seem to be around anymore. This writer basically pissed in the bed when he all but had the son rape his mother at the beginning of the story and then ruined what little he had gained since by bringing in the piece of shit father and let this character screw up the rest of the story.