All Comments on 'Take Away My Life'

why didnt she go???

this had great potential!

LETS GET READY FOR THE HUNT BOYS!

Please you have to say that this was only part one? It was so good and hot please continue and tell us if her life.

I realize there is a few grammaer and spelling mistakes as this is my first submission, I should have read more into how to submit. But the story will continue! (with more substance to it and hopefully less mistakes). This was test drive. I am working on the next chapter. The Hunt.

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