by Dom_man76
nice job. the pressure stayed up there like your last chapter in the tale and this one was longer and that is a plus. the exitement stayed and you didn't repeat yourself, i do hope you continue with this series.
Dom_76: Great story, would hope that Kelly gets at least another visit, need more depth{longer}and more detail{greater interaction between the two}. possible visit to his home for weekend. just my thoughts..bockscar! p/s keep going you have talent for the darker aspect of life. again thanks.
Please write another chapter, I can almost come reading your stories without touching myself.