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MichaelGannonover 9 years agoYou got game!
Awesome debut, Kyriae! Don't stop now. Keep 'em coming. Maybe part deux?
-Micahael
Kyriaeover 9 years agoAuthorMichael
Part 2 is in the works and im going to try to get it finished and uploaded by end of the week
smithbill1970over 9 years agoStory is hot and good for stroke session.
And here comes the "but", your grammar needs some work. Nothing serious enough to distract me, or prevent me from finishing the story. The inconsistent verb tense is mildly irritating. Find a good editor for the next one.
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