All Comments on 'Taken at the Lake'

Then she can go over and beat him to a bloddy pulp.

This explores the dark side of our erotic nature in an almost dream-like way.

Which was my pleasure, and I am so glad to see you got this up finally! I was wondering where it was.

FtF

you wrote it well. Not trashy and nothing smutty about it.

It was known some woman did orgasm during the act (they are not proud of the way their body react too) not because they really want to but the way the rapist force pleasure from their bodies like giving them lots of foreplay. And a sure way to get the woman wet is well, give them a good licking.Yes, some rapist wants the victims to 'enjoy' the act too even though they know the victim was really reluctant.

Most of the time these rape victims were more psychologically scarred than the battered rape victims because they felt disgusted with themselves for responding to the foreplay of the rapist.

And that is exactly what happen to your heroine here. She didn't want it but she really didn't have a choice when they played with her body like that.

A great story which kept me on the edge of my seat. The build up and tension throughout the story was wonderfully done. Katie the Brave indeed .. :) Well done, Ms Scribe .. a very well told story.

different, well written, and left me wanting more

And that was a sick thing to do huh mommy with child prop.

The talent shows but now we will see where next you go - hopefully away from basely inhuman made human acts.

I'm sorry, but I couldn't get past the fact that she left the kid in the car, at a rest stop that her husband had WARNED her about in the first place!! The strange dog thing (way to get a bestiality fantasy in by the way, fine under-the-wire work there) made for an interesting plot twist, but... she left the kid in the car! I had to skip to the end to check and make sure that the kid was ok before I could go back and read the rest, honestly. I really didn't have a lot of sympathy for her after that point... :(