All Comments on 'Taken By Surprise'

I wonder What he'll ask : ) loool

Great Story!!! I look forward to reading future stories by you. Thanks. --Jim

A great story that I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Absolutely loved it!

the next time he is doing what? beating the shit out of her because he is so caring, if she wants it or not? another woman who loves to be with an arrogant male who does not care how a woman feels by his side? a friendship where one can do what he wants and she has just to take it. at least thats the impression this little story gives every reader. some seem to like it very much. you all love Chris Brown then, he showed the world who's the man and how he loves Rhiannon. I mean he could have also raped her maybe she would have loved that too.

He was definitely taking charge, but if that is his way of reassuring her of his desire and she loves it, what is the issue.There really was no abuse, just hot erotic 'make up' sex. I wish that all of my disputes with lovers had ended this well and hot! Keep on writing and I will gladly keep on reading!

Excellent. The details made the story, the tempo was superb, and the dialogue very realistic. Looking forward to more from you!

I agree. The details made the story plauseable. It is always good to read a loving wife story such as this.Excellent read.

and well paid off. Ty.

whats the question he's gonna ask her!!!!!!!!!?????????????/

I NEVER comment so consider this an honor. You are an extremely talented writer. If you write books or aspire to one day, please let me know so that I can support you! Your stories are written beautifully and with so much imagery and detail --and not just the sex scenes! I found myself empathizing with Liv, I've felt those feelings before. Your stories seem so real. Excellent work. :-)

ok, it wasnt just the aussie elements that made me like this story, in fact favourite it, it just spoke to my need as a female, my jealousy as a female, my want to be subdued and light a guys fire with my spark. lol that sort of thing. thankee again!

It's not everyday that words, written well, place your mind into a situation. This was real, excellent (at least from an Aussie perspective). very descriptive. Can't wait for more.

Great line.

It sounds like you've experienced a bad situation a time or two. Unfortunately it also still has you as the abused. Don't let the situation you experienced keep you being abused. Let it go. Don't allow the abuser to keep abusing your mind. This was a story that conveyed a single afternoon of their relationship, the rest was all from the person who abused your mind. Take it from me, if you allow this abuser to keep abusing you, you'll never experience passion for life and all it has to offer. I say this without knowledge of what happened in your past but your words show anger about what is still happening from your experience. nm56