All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful Start

I'm sitting at the edge of my seat and can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't make us wait long. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent start, cant wait to see more!

I like the dual perspective and your style of writing. Keep going and see just how wet you can make me!

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