All Comments on 'Taken On A Winter's Night'

One simple phone call and loads of DNA to give them.

Simples.

You have lots of errors in this that spoil the flow of the story. Find an editor please.

And our two brave heroes ran away to find another victim

This was a good story, I liked the thrill of it but the guys left too much evidence too much DNA. Can't believe they set her free just like that - should have kept her for a couple of days :-)

You spent the first five paragraphs describing the weather. That kind of sums up how things were described in this. Very repetitive, and drawn out in an unnecessary way. Eighty percent of your sentences start with the word SHE. All of these things made this a difficult read.

Go to the police and get a rape kit done. That's what she should do next.

Agreed, work on description, had to skip the first half of the first page because it kept repeating how bad the weather was when all you had to say was it was raining and she was wearing high heels.

I really liked it. I could feel all those touches and the fear. I would love that. Very hot.

didn't care for it in general. It's raining, so what. Lights on, off, on, off, etc. Can't you make up your mind or afford a blindfold? one guy, then two, now three. Couldn't they work together well sooner. Time for the cops and throw

there asses in jail.

I don’t understand why people feel the need to read stories like this, and then talk about rape kits and how this is wrong and blah blah blah. Like obviously y’all like this bc you sat through the whole story. Anyway, this was a good story and one of my fantasies :)

didnt like anal always a tern off blowjob not complete poor

good story, bloody awful spelling and grammer