All Comments on 'Taken on the Subway'

What an enticing beginning, I really hope you will take this further!

This never happened to me while stationed in DC. Wish it would have. Enjoied it all. Short but real good.

Damn! I've been catching the wrong train to work. Enjoyed your story and looking forward to a continuation if there's more...I hope so!

I am so glad that you wrote another fine story! This is like the first one story where you tease and build to a great climax. Please continue this line, I would like to find the connection.

Makes you want to keep reading. Very good. Wish there was more to the story.

Chapter 2 anyone? How does he know who she is? Did his men know what was happening?