by retiresoon
IS is so natural to have a brother and sister fucking each other....as they both learn about sex from the person they grew up with. I personally fucked my older sister as we both lost our virginity's to each other.....so hot & taboo....we learned so much......This story NEEDS a sequel!
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...but spoilt by quite a lot of bad spelling. <i>"Allot"</i>?
keep better track of what you write in the begining when she first went to his room you said he had an erection but when she started playing with it you said it was flacid they don't get soft when you play with them and there was no reason for it to get soft so stop confusing the readers and keep better track of what you write and get a good editor and never post a story without going through an editor
i really doubt anyone with TBI would be allowed to drive in case they passed out or had a severe headache and couldn't see properly also sex would probably be out due to the strain and fast jerky movements might cause more brain damage THINK BEFORE WRITING AND KEEP IT ATLEAST SOMEWHAT BELEIVABLE PLEASE
DBRS
the punk who said, I really doubt anyone with TBI would be allowed to drive is a piece of shit
People W/ TBIs can drive my Ex girlsfriend's big brother had a brain surgery when he was 6 he started to have seizures when he was 9. At 15 the Dr. told him w/ treatment w/ meds he has to be seizure free for 7months before he can take the test after he got his license. The Dr. told him if he has anouther seizure he has to wait another 7months to drive again.
Then when he was 21 he had another surgery he lost use of his left hand & leg he is still able to drive w/ one of those balls in the wheel.
But about anyway this story needs to be continued.
I have a TBI and I can drive just fine thank you very much. My sister and I also screw though not as frequently as when we were in our teens. The last time was last year, I had just gotten out of the hospital and really needed a bath so Sis bathed me. Well one thing led to another and soon we were fucking like crazy
no way he would be allowed to drive or have sex. the way he gets sudden attacks of debilitating pain and the way his meds knock him out there is no way he would be allowed to drive or have sex. if he was to drive and have an attack he would crash and the strain from sex would cause an attack. if you had her doing the driving and stayed away from full hard core sex sticking to feeling each other up or her riding him it would have been believable BUT NOT THE WAY YOU WROTE IT.
It's a story, a good story, he can do anything he wants.
Just enjoy, stop being a critic.
nyc/guy
How old are u and i hope my parents do that same thing u said what me and my cousin did... i was to scared totell my parents and they loved my cousin and they always wanted me to hang out with him but i never wanted to tell them he had body pain and we use to sneak do it together ... should i tell my parents he moved out at 20 and now he lives in queens and my parents miss him they love him like a son and were madly in love and i sometimes skip school to be with him and he wants me too move in with him and tell my parents i had 3 birth controls already cuz of condoms and his eager to feel his cock without a condom should i tell my parents ?
This was by far (and no jokes here) one of the best stories I have ever read. I just wish I had an older brother now because this story gives me ideas. Like they said ^ it needs a sequel not like there's anything you could write that would make me more horney!
I am the author of this story. I have TBI. I drive. Even after my injury I had sex.
I will be working on my spelling errors and re-posting this story soon. However because it's been so long since I've logged onto this account it will be posted under a different name. You see even though it's safe for me to drive it's been almost three years since I've been able to write more than a few lines.
in other words you are lying to us again. nthe story was total crap and unrealistic and not believable in any way.
Yes, it's a very good story, and brother and sister fucking is always welcome. Especially in this story, where the brother busts his sister's cherry. It should be official job of all big brothers to bust their kid sister's cherry. The first hard cock up a baby sister's cute little cunt should be her own brother's cock.
While I do like ALL incest stories, especially mom and son. My favorites are where the parents know and give consent or even participate. When it comes to mother son stories I prefer that the father and mother are still married and the the father knows that the mother is fucking their son. So to me this is an AWESOME story and now I must put at least one of my hands to some better use. :)
I wish people would stop critiquing the little details , who cares what he logically can and can't do with this type of brain injury , it was a great story, period! And I definitely can't wait for a sequel ! Keep writing my friend , even if it's only one line at a time.
~David
A lot of mistakes spelling wise...'messaged' for instance
Nice that the parental were OK with them fucking each other.
4 stars
I never comment but this story was so full of love and happiness i felt i just had to . Looking forward to more of your work .