All Comments on 'Taking Michelle & Tina'

Like all of your stories, I loved it!

Just like the daughter who gets her 21 yo cherry busted by her Dad's 10 inch tool, I am satisfied by the erotic nature of this story of father/daughter love.

The only thing is the 21 yo daughter was so sexy how did she manage to remain a virgin until she was 21? It helped having the girls best friend to also share that special moment with them.

Yawnnnn next.

Get serious! These girls sound like 14, 16 at most. I know it not legal, but if you're going to write about girls like that, don't say they're 21. 18 is pushing it. Good story, excellent dialog, but too far from reality.

It was realistic enough to be what it is, a fantasy. Whoever said a fantasy has to be totally realistic? and as for the sounding too young part, 21 wasnt too bad, but 18 would have been perfect, i happen to know women who act alot younger, theres nothing wrong with it. bravo on the story, it was great.