All Comments on 'Taking Out the Competition: Alan'

Alan could seek revenge, or things could work out for a threesome... all depends on how exactly their personalities are.

In base ball they are not called points they are called runs! If you really played the game I think you would have known this.

The story is just to fake. Stories that could be real are much better than homo fantasy stories are.

But don’t give up try and try again.

You have to finish this at the ver least. We have to know what their dynamics were following this episode. Did alan seek revenge, flip the table or what. We have to know. Wish i had friends that would have like me that much to show me the way things were going to be. But then on another level that was down right gang rape. Careful how you proceed. Good luck on continuing this story.

What a sick story! The two guys raped the third one. No one deserves to be raped.

i enjoyed that.? however rape is some thing else.? however i think a twat that fucks anothers bitch deserves what he got.? and now i will go for a hot bath before i go fuck my fella.

Loved it

So wrong on so very many levels. Payback's a bitch but not when it included rape.

Is this supposed to be entertaining? Two guys rape and humiliate a "friend"? What planet are you living on?

That's a hot story if the commenter's aren't into it tough shit but it is hot! Keep.it up and I am a female who really enjoyed the story for what it was!

haters forget it's just a story

hot writing bro

A very different gay sex story.

Well writen but I don't quite know what to make of the rape scene.

I'll give it a 4 and wait for the next in the series.

Just sad.....