by shandal
like how Froo grew emotionally, mentally and finally took control of her own life with the love and help of a "Real" man, not an abuser.
Those great ending to the story that you wrote. I like how Francesca stood up to her mother finally and told her exactly what had happened with Gary. I also like to how she was able to finally tell Misha that she loved him and that she proposed marriage to him. I also love the way that the two came together when they found out she was pregnant. Keep up the good work.
I was captured by these two from the very start of the story. I loved reading this story, and I couldn't wait to find out what happens next!
I usually get bored with longer stories, and stop reading them way before the end...but not this one! Great work!
Thank you. I confess, that while the story has been enjoyable throughout, I cheered when Froo spoke up to her mother. Yay!
I love the way Froo has grown from their first meeting, and come to realise her love for him without anyone having to point the way. <br> Standing up to her overbearing mother was excellent! <br> <br> Thanks for a great story, and believable characters.