All Comments on 'Tales from the Guilds Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

yay for footnotes, the one thing that was missing :)

FormerReaderFormerReaderover 6 years ago
Hopefully not the end

But nice wrap-up if so.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 6 years ago
Good story.

You captured a lot of Sir Pterry's stories. Thank you.

voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueover 6 years agoAuthor
Still working

This isn't the last story but the next one involves a different Guild and it's taking a while to work out. Also, I am really trying to find a way to put in proper superscript and subscript footnotes.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
What are

The numbered things at the end? Destroyed an otherwise ok tale.

It seemed you did not know what to do so you just wrote the last chapter to suddenly end it. Without any build up they went from learning to retiring. You need to actually include something to write a story.

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