by voluptuary_manque
This isn't the last story but the next one involves a different Guild and it's taking a while to work out. Also, I am really trying to find a way to put in proper superscript and subscript footnotes.
The numbered things at the end? Destroyed an otherwise ok tale.
It seemed you did not know what to do so you just wrote the last chapter to suddenly end it. Without any build up they went from learning to retiring. You need to actually include something to write a story.