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Click hereIt was the slowest build up to orgasm Talla had experienced in some time. She took those precious moments to feel Yua from the inside, to feel her pride in her hard won body – especially when Talla began nibbling on her breasts. These little bites, teeth to bare flesh, teeth to nipples, were sheer ecstasy for Yua. Talla realized that Yua had the hardest time asking her male partners to do this for her.
Fingers trapped inside each other, they felt their orgasms approaching. Their free hands were wrapped around each others' backs, crushing their ribs and driving air out of their lungs. This last was done on purpose, so that – when the orgasm finally came – neither had the breath to let out the scream it deserved. Instead, both were locked in wide mouthed, voiceless rictuses of sheer pleasure.
...
Panting, they fell on their backs beside each other.
"That," Yua said between breaths, "was weird."
Both girls lay staring at the ceiling.
"Your meshes are never like that?" Talla asked.
"Yours are?"
"With other girls, yes."
A short pause.
"And with him," Yua said.
Enough had come over the mesh that there was no need to say who 'him' was. Zhair'lo featured prominently in Talla's visions of the demise of the Temple.
"Yeah."
"What happened with him?" Yua asked, turning on her side to face Talla.
"The meshes were like this," Talla said, keeping her voice as steady as she could. The breathlessness was nice because it hid her emotions. "But even better. When the sex was over, we could still sense each other, almost like talking."
"You went to him," Yua said. It was a statement, not a question. Yua had seen much from inside the mesh.
"More than once," Talla said. Now she was glad for the sweat on her brow that masked the tears in her eyes. "They caught us. Forced him to whip me. Gave him some potion that made him have sex with another girl while I watched."
"Madra Zen," Yua cursed softly and laid a hand over Talla's heart. "The bitches."
Talla turned to face Yua, letting her tears slide down her cheek to the bed.
"So you know my story," Talla said. "And I know I can trust you."
Yua nodded and Talla watched the muscles of her face tense.
"What do you need?" Yua said through gritted teeth.
- COMMENTS
hakdrakkenover 11 years agoMy favorite characters and stories are the ones where the storyteller describes rather than tells us something, and lets us realize what we're being told on our own.
Like, some stories would harp on "Talla is very powerful," and really work very hard to convince us of that, probably by repeating it a lot.
Xtorch instead describes Talla as feeling different from other girls, and we get to watch as she starts to discover and use those differences... to become powerful.
gogreenalmost 12 years agointeresting story
liek other i have many questions but i'l lsit back and read and wait for now.
thanks.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThanks for putting another chap up. Nice to see the story getting there.
Mike8320almost 12 years agoWhat you're missing:
Iron - Form
Within - Sweetness
Stength - Endowment
xtorchalmost 12 years agoAuthorDivisions: Sweetness, Endowment, Form
Disciplines
Sweetness: Within, Lips, Pussy
Endowment: Abundance, Point, Strength
Form: Iron, Tight, Facial
Within: Administration, Medical, Teaching
Lips: Medical Research
Pussy: Genealogy, Medical, Nursery
Abundance: Engineering/Admin
Point: Engineering
Strength: Test Engineering, Regulation
Iron: Protocol and Law, Admin, Military
Tight: Enforcement, Miltary
Facial: Art, Music, Dance, Clothing
Hope this helps. :-)
Yes, I will publish an appendix. I promise. Eventually.
Xavier
cryforhelpalmost 12 years agoI seem to have some trouble remembering which discipline exist and what their purpose is, and I can't seem to find it.
Here is an incomplete list, would somebody please copy it and fill it out and/or correct it:
Form
- Tight
- Facial
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Sweetness
- Pussy
- Lips
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Endowment
- Abundance
- Point
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Mike8320almost 12 years agoThere are obvious plot questions such as "Who exactly are Talla's parents", "What is the Preistess' consipiracy trying to accomplish", "How will they topple the temple" and "When will Talla and Zhair'lo reunite?" which are sure to be addressed in this story. Beyond that, however; here are some thoughts that I have been pondering about some of the background information and what the story might touch on. I submit this not searching for answers or hoping you'll take my suggestions, but rather to provide some feedback as to what one reader is pondering after re-reading the stories for at least the second or third time. Also, it gives me an excuse to hash through this story that I'm obsessed with.
Sisterhood:
-What special rights (beyond attending a trial) does sisterhood grant?
-Is sisterhood used as a political tool for advancemant, getting good assignments, etc.?
-How often does one have sisters outside one's division? Could they meet to talk (and plot) at the pool in the goddess' triangle?
Monogamy
-How often does this occur?
-Will we learn the story behind Tina's Monogamy charge?
-Will we meet Tina's man? Can he (and others like him) be recruited by "The Movement"?
-It seems Kenji may have been involved in Monogamy. Have we met his woman? (I know who I want it to be; not Tina)
Temple Advancement:
-What kind of hurdles does one need to clear to advance?
-How much are politics, sisterhood, or relationships are involved?
-What is the timeframe/levels for having kids? Could it be a requirement to advance up a level to keeper/acolyte/high officer?
-What does a "rising star" look like? Are Shanata, Maksa, and Talla rising stars? Is one groomed from above?
Miscellaneous:
-What is Shananta's story?
-Will you have people attend the regular Bazaar of Form?
-Do you get more coins the higher your rank and/or more important your job (child tending instead of laundry)? Do people get bribed?
-I love the metaphor of the board game that mirrors temple life. Great foreshadowing tool. Is the game close enough to reality that strategy can be learned for overthrowing the temple from it?
-Are there any secret passages into or out of the Temple? Oddly placed wells and buildings have been noted as well as an aqueduct.
-Does Talla have a special, innate ability to understand engineering beyond just being a quick study?
-Life seems to be much more difficult out on the mysterious frontier. If Doctors (Sweetness) and Warriors (Form) are assigned out there, what about Engineers (Endowment)?
PS - Well I had typed this out to post on the end of the last chapter, but now there is a new chapter which already address a few of the things I was curious about, especially monogamy. I am posting it anyway because much of it is still relevant. Keep up the great work; I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
