All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 15'
by xtorch
- 8 Comments
katgoddess1over 10 years agoNo matter what the temple tries, love will find a way to succeed.
cantfightfateover 10 years agoThe chemistry is excellent. It's a shame that the story keeps pulling them apart because their relationship is what makes the story so special. While it's necessary for them to overcome some adversity, it would be frustrating to go many more months without them being together.
I look forward to seeing how you develop the story.
Anonymousover 8 years agothe other temples are doing the same.
Zhair' is the son of a previous goddess in the local temple and Talla is the daughter of a previous goddess from the other town. To me, the current 'Pussy + Goddess gangs' from BOTH temples SHOULD want our two blue glowing lovers to make babies; after they take over and change the temple, of course.
The only flaw I see in our heroes plan is the 'temple' is uniquitous and they can only effect their local temple. Wouldn't another temple just come to rescue? But then, there doesn't seem to be a lot of temple to temple communication, though, if any. (@x: hint, hint). LoL....
It will ONLY work if it is a peaceful revolution, from within, because of Form being in control of the military. Of course, if the current Goddess dies at childbirth, and the resulting 'shift' in the power structure puts the Sorceress of Beauty, (need the appendix), into power as the Queen of Form, THEN they might have a shot. But how do you change the Queen of Form without elevating her to Goddess?
Oh my, a conundrum wrapped in a dilemma, inside a paradox box... whatever will our heroes do? {{cue the dramatic musical crescendo}}.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha..... {{fade to black}}
GeoD
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