All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 02'

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Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Dry opinion

Feels like back at school again. The logic, passion and outstanding portrayal of characters allows read to bond with the story. Stories, that draw images in ones mind are the best. So far, this is one of them.

kiwiplum 6 months ago

Best thing about getting old, I can return to stories I knew I loved and then fall in love all over again. Cheers

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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