All Comments on 'Tammy asks Jimmy for Help'

hey there, i really enjoyed the story, the pace was ace. the only thing that let it down was the way the characters call each other knight and princess - i think it shows they are too naive and this is a bit of a come down.

otherwise, wicked ;o)

I felt like I was reading a story about young kids playing doctor "you show me yours, I'll show you mine"...both of the characters should have been made a little more mature...you can have inexperience without dumbing it down.

Very good story line...I like the longer stories,,, this one needs more chapters...I liked the Knight and Princess...

I have not read any of your Lesson Series but I like the

way you write...

Should have been chapter 22 of The Lessons, which are your forte. The boy/girl interactions and "discoveries" re: sex are your best work, although the pillory was damn hot. Anyway, more Lessons, please... some of the chapters left things "dangling".

...Continue it! You spent a lot of time on your Lesson's stories, which are really for a certain type of reader, but don't seem to continue your other stories even with lots of positive feedback. Do all of your readers a favor and continue some of these stories that have such good starts!

Great story.

Great story.

petifile?

Hot story.