by Frederick Carol
Really nice story. Well written and really hot. look forward to a follow up with Mom and then when the daughter comes home.
Fantastic Start!!! I hope you will many chapters, it was very good and sexy story, thanks
I so hope that the story gods find a way that the mother and daughter can share the young stud,there's sure to be enough cock for both of them.It would just be a shame for mom to give up having the lad when daughter comes home.maybe the lad needs to move in with the sexy mom and be a full time pleasure giver for her.....Rich
I hope when the time cums, Bill has Tammy and her mom in the same bed at the same time. A girl does need a little guidance...
im hoping that your story continues. it would be a shame to leave it as is. so much more can be written, and i would love to see where you take it. thank you.
Great story line. Great writing. There's a lot to follow up on here. Please keep going with this.
Good story well and economically told. It has possibilities to go off in all sorts of directions if you want to take it further. Good work.
While I agree that there are many possibilities, I think that this story can stand well on its own. It is well written, realistic, and VERY erotic. Good work!
Excellent piece of writing. Can't wait for the sequel. Mom really must be present at her daughter's deflowering. Not just as a passive observer, but as an active participant. After all, she really needs to pass on her years of experience to the next generation. You know it makes sense.
It's nice to see some of the former top writers returning to Lit you have been missed.
Sequel please.
This is a very good storie, it was also very hot. It has a good begining then it flows into the body of it then the action part. Please just don't let it end there it has got a lot of possibilities it needs to be continued.
is the lady saying "Fuck me" and "Fuck me hard." Your ladies use the language of the very hot, the very demanding, the very needy. And, I love it. The rest of the stories are getting better and better and I certainly enjoy reading them. They are mostly predictable, but that's a good thing, because it creates an image of anticipation and then a second image of fantasy-reality as the image cums alive. And the lady gets her wish! Thanks for the story. More?
Most enjoyable. I presume females will love this. Has an air of sweetness, and quite rich in an unselfish way. Anxious for Tammy to return home on break. Don't wait too long, okay?