All Comments on 'Tanners and the Brute'

by Acerbicscribbler

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not bad

to be honest is was very good chu :3

merriquissemerriquisseover 12 years ago
Loved it.

Really loved this. Very well written. Please keep writing. You are remarkably good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

really great. well-written...pulled you into the world. I'd only have liked to have seen him taken from that awful village for good by the brute :) great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

Excellently written, simmering to finish. Great characterization. You're a talented writer and I hope to read more of your work.

CMfromSwedenCMfromSwedenover 12 years ago

wow - you are a very talanted writer !!

Please, sir, I want some more ;)

NightTempestNightTempestover 12 years ago
loved this...

Does the brute stick around I wonder? Hmmm maybe there will there be more... Great job!

Xoxo

Night

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So...

Another story tomorrow, please?

You're very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You did it again

A-mazing!

I will expect a new story everyday. Damn, but you are brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The best!

This is one of my favourite stories!

Loved the Othello reference. Keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story and well written. Loved Tanners' innocence and Kellan's kindness.

MoreRudeThanYouMoreRudeThanYouover 12 years ago
Indeed.

Yeah, so.. I've read this story more than once, and I am pleased to find that it just gets better. You have a great talent, and I'm certainly looking forward to reading more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Everything I've read from ya' is definitely awesome. You're one of the few people I can say I'd read all of your stories if you'd put 'em up.

TimothyMTimothyMover 11 years ago
Please write more Tanners stories

Such a clever devil and such a sweet boy and such a hot brute equal a great story, both well thought out and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow, just wow!

That was so hot! The very best historical daddy-twink story I've read so far, the details are amazing and makes this story even more realistic, İ could totally picture the brute and Tanners in that tent and now İ want more, please give us a sequel!

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Hi again. I remembered my passwords. I have a blog full of rough drafts and story beginnings. I've also put some ebooks together of material not on Literotica. Find me on Smashwords under Walker C. Fields.