All Comments on 'Tara's Breeding'

Definitely a story to excite the LADIES. and make them that wish it were they. You randy girls.

Best story I have read in a long time...from please no to please breed me...;you paint a wonderful picture, please write more

DRUG is a medication

DRAGGED is past tense of DRAG

otherwise very well written .

No

Came really, really fucking hard to this, holy shit. I'm not one to leave comments on pics typically, but holy fuck I'm still shaking. So hard to find insemination imagery as great as yours.

extremely erotic.

Gets me off every time. Thanks!

Made me wish I was Tara

Idk but breeding or impregnating a woman rly turn me on..

Who ever you are never stop writing I love this story and all of the others you have written!!!

Love to feel a cock spasm it's load into me so this story really helped me to get off

Love the energy in this story.

My kids have kids now, but I still remember verbalizing the emotion when my wife and i were literally breeding

It wasn't a normal practice. Both had the feeling and we both verbalised it. Independently. Coming out unplanned and simultaneously was so intimate and so sincere.

This story was well written but it's bigger effect was the memories.

Thank you.

Greg

Well,I'm not one to call names for difference of opinion. That's infantile.

I found it lacked depth. Touch her a little. Make her suck your cocks, then just rape her over and over until she responds. Just drawn out rape.Typical story were the males think it only takes their dick.And she's gonna get off on that ? Unappealing dialogue as they talk back and forth, I found it a bit boring .

I read this and loved it so much that i passed the link to my Master and he loved it as well. So much that he wants to breed me too! OMG..NEVER stop writing!

I hope you take all of the comments into heart. and write a part 2 worth a 5 star rating. I'll honestly say... I liked it... but it felt so lacking.

fuckin good

Holy fuck this was the best story I have ever read!!!!!! 100% will be reading again! PLEASE MAKE A "Tara's Breeding" #2

I literally shared this with like 8 of my friends!!

I loved the story! Very well written. I would love to see this develop into something more. I agree that some foreplay on their part would be nice and even better a pregnancy and developing relationship between Roy and Tara! He planted his seed - now it's his duty to love and protect her! Please keep writing! And please Tara ch. 2!

This girl loves sex and lots of it. Of course Roy moves in with her. Also, since Roy has no problem about sharing, have Tara become an escort. She gets lots of sex and the author has a treasure chest of experiences to write about.

That was sooo hot! I haven't read a story that good in ages. Excellent descriptions and great crescendo. The mental aspect was well written and horny as hell. Great work!

can anyone email me true stories or videos or comics about black bad boys who are poor rough lowlife bullies thugs forcing orgasm on pretty white or asian lady bosses, teachers, faithful housewives, policewomen, execs, businesswomen, etc. molesting violating them humiliating them, breeding them against their will, turning them into bitches sluts sex slaves housemaids milking cow, devouring their earnings savings, etc.

i have been molested before so please don't ask about me, i just feel a deep throbbing deep down, whenever i read true stories or black comics and watch videos those things happening. The feeling of being wronged but why it gives some reluctant arousal!

email it to me at virgintsik1@gmail.com

I was shot through the whole story! Thank god it lasted a while because so did I! I need a Roy in my life! He would definitely be someone to keep around forever. Mmm 😉

loved this! very well written...kept me hot all the way through!

When three guys decided to gang bang my sister, one of them nearly died from excessive loss of blood and cased to be a fully functional man, another ended in hospital for several months healing multiple broken bones and had to learn to walk anew, third presumably escaped the scene relatively unhurt, but I have not heard about him ever since. My sister returned home walking twenty miles through the night. There was no charges, either way.

PS. In a way, I like the story.

Rape is not entertainment.

Give it a rest its a ridiculous porno story with no real characters and your comments are as cartoonish as the story.

I found that this breeding story was hot and kept me excited.

Racism has no place here, move on dude. This story is about getting something you desire and loving it.

Anyone who glorifies Rape is sick....................

Rape is bad.

I love your descriptions, how she wanted/didn't want then craved. Ignore the people too stupid to know the difference between fantasy/fiction and reality. As well as too stupid to understand the noncon category. Yes, rape is bad. however, there are times I fantasize about having my choices taken from me (in a nonviolent way) and being pleasured in ways I never would agree to. But secretly fantasize about. I love how the men may be strong as bears but still thoughtful, even polite. It was comforting. And this was written so wonderfully in expressing that fantasy.....

And just think how strange is it for someone who can't even handle the idea of fictitious rape to read a story already knowing it would contain content they disprove of?

Absolutely loved it! The description, the action, the internal conflict in her mind.. primal need should always win out...

I wouldn't mind having a night like that. 3 horny men, 3 big cocks and a lot of fun. And it's not rape if you like it :)

Looking for rough lowlife black bad boys from the hood

who can email me true stories pics vids of poor blacks dominating

decent white well-off women forcing them become sluts

humiliating them turning them into milking cows ohhhh

virgintsik1 atgmailcom

My similar fantasy and it involves long term captivity and being bred. At University and, as a 1st year, I was forced several times after swim practice by other girls on the team. I stayed on the team so it didn't dissuade me from competing and while not quite the same I think it's why I like the idea of being bred as girls can't do that to you.

I do not agree with rape (obviously) but your story hits home with many of us.

Cheers!

I was so jealous .... I need this senario so baddddd

I need this in my life SOOO bad. Just the thought of being held down and forcibly bred by big, strong men turns me on so much.

So very nice

This made me cum, just a fact. Plus what I really like was how descriptive it was. It gave me a great visual of what was going on. And it was a coherent story line that didn't puase at awkward moment or skip over any bits. Perfect, perfect, perfect!

my wife and I were both reading your story with her hands on my dick and mine rubbing her pussy....we could not finish the story until we finished each other.... I left a nice load of cum in her accepting pussy while it clamped in her orgasm.... write more !!!!!!!

Please please write a sequel to this one!

Great story to say the least. I have one to share as soon as I can dig it out of my archives.. It's about a couple who are employed to clean up new homes after the contractors leave. Sometimes before they left.

"Tara's Breeding" is a truly great story and extremely well written. It's one of the best I've read and it actually tells the story with continuity and strong visualization. The only 'error' I found was (I think) on the last half of page three, in the first few words on the line. I don't remember what the word was but it was either misspelled, or it was used in the wrong tense. (eg: too/two or here/hear--not those words but like that.) The only reason that I noticed it was because it was the first (and only that I saw) problem in the entire text. Congratulations for a very good story and the closest I have found here to impeccable writing.

Omg this story made me dripping wet. I don't see my name in stories often least of all in ones that actually depict one of my fantasies. I would love to read a squeal to this, I already know I'm going to break down tonight and beg my husband to cum inside my pussy.

Omg this story is so hot and has me dripping wet. That would be awesome

Loved it, would like to read what happens if she is pregnant and what Roy and his boys do for her. Keep up the great writing...but def do a continuation :)

I appreciate the fact that this became a consensual fantasy play out by the third page. That point is where it became a great story for me, just personal turn ons. I am sure rape fantasy folks that dig non consent love it. But, not my thing, and there are sickos out there that justify raping women in it playing out in their minds like this. But, rape is not sexy and terrifying.

However, With the turn it took, because of the turn it took, I hope there will be a sequel. You have a very fluid writing style with some unique forms of imagery. This story was nearly flawless, grammatically. Well done and thank you for putting the time in to writing this and submitting. Bravissimo

That was sick.

In more than one way. One of them is a good way.

after reading this i recall how i was molested by filthy street boys long time ago

can anyone here email me true stories of lowlife rough black bad boys from the hood forcing orgasm on decent white women turning them into sluts milking cow?

virgintsik1 atgmailcom

You bring my rape fetish to life... so erotically imagined, so masterfully executed, so tastefully impregnated... thank you, only wishing it was YOU offering my pleasures to all other men!

Janet

this has always been my absolute favorite story which plunged me deeper into my fantasies.

WOW!! This story was so HOT!! I couldn't wait to get to the next PAGE!! Great writing and very awesome imagination! I'll be re-reading this again, and again ;)

Very riveting! I enjoyed it till the very end. Bravo can we have a sequel? At least more chapters? Does her belly swell? Do they continue to keep her filled and satisfied? I hope they stick around to keep Her sated!

I absolutely love this story. Its one of the few that I find myself returning to time and time again--it is just so well written that often others seems a little bleak in comparison. The pacing in this is great (often buildup in erotic stories feels overdone and bland, but not in this one) and so when it finally gets around to Tara being fucked it feels a lot more satisfying. And its also very hot. Veeery hot.

You are a talented writer!

Is it just me, or is it instinctive in every woman to NEED to breed incessantly? Perhaps for us mature women, the fetish of being kept merely as breeders is orgasmic! Not just breeders, but the entire sequence, from copulation to insemination to pregnancy and delivery and on to lactation... the cycle begins anew with every seaon.

Bravo! You've captured my deepest fears and my most secret inhibitions, and brought them to light for all to see.

Six stars, dear Sir: five for your story; one, to welcome your baby that I yearn to carry.

This is the first story on this site or any other like this that I have read and I must say I'm not in the least bit disappointed, I wish I could write like that LOL

The guys are not just virile, they are magnificently hung . . . of course. What would you expect of rapists? By the way, nobody's eyes roll back in pleasure. That's just dumb. Rape is rape and these idiots are irresponsible rapists, though I admit that to be redundant. There is plenty of room for hot erotic story writing without all the over-hyped crap, though it might require a grown up to do such writing.

Thinking of the girl as my actual real gf, would love to see her taken like that. Bkforher@hotmail.com

My pussy and nipples are sore from the work out I gave them whilst reading your story! Thank you but now I’m jealous because my vibratos isn’t nearly as satisfying as those movers seem to be.

anyone from kenya or anywhere in the world who would wish to have something hot call me i got a 7.87incch monster to satiafy you ,ladies only i will tease you until you beg me to fuuck you

Its rape

Just because it was her fantasy and ends up accepting doesn't mean it wasn't rape

Yep. Great writing. I'm not much for Non-Consent that stays that way through to the end. Reluctance, however, is where this category serves me well. When someone comes to like what's happening, then the tension shifts.

Semantics, I know. As a number of anons have pointed out, it's still rape. I do confess to some surprise that the anons feel compelled to point it out. After all, this is the N-C/R category. Did they expect romance?

That was really hot - really caught the feeling of seeing a gorgeous man

The rape threw me, though. Tara was openly interested in Roy, I was expecting them to flirt and start something wild. I couldn't read the page where he suddenly came in and raped her, it turned me off completely. Might be nice if the title made it clearer that this was non-consent.

skimmed thru it to see what its all about,, it was rape and then she liked it and wanted more,,yup, sure..

People come to the non-consent page and not expect rape non-consent is rape🙄 like what do you think you'll find? If it's consent it would be in a different page. Anyway love the story would love a follow-up maybe when she's pregnant or just had the baby a second breeding. Only thing I have that's constructive is some of the adjectives are a little off putting like belching makes me think of burping.

Why people read stories that are CLEARLY labeled nonconsent/reluctance, then bitch in the comments that they "weren't expecting rape" or, "liked it until he raped her"...

I've read stories where the guy pisses down her throat (which I'm not a fan of) and I realize after that it was tagged for water sports and that it was my own fault for not checking the tags, and that's WAY less obvious than the section the story was written in.

If you idiots don't like rape stories then find a different category to read from.

I loved this story, btw. One of the few stories I enjoy rereading. The attractive males, the alpha foreman taking control... very hot.

My legs are still shaking from the orgasms... she's so lucky

You cannot really call Tara's breeding rape, because she had designs on Roy from the start as she found his bulge and fine ass. She probably was "in heat" as she enjoyed all the hard cocks in her, even though she tried to deny it. Her pussy was enjoying every stroke of the studs cocks. I like talk of breeding and "in heat" as this is what keeps our species going.

I have seen it all. The story was posted under “non consensual”. So, You all obviously came here with the intention of bitching about it. Do you equally bitch about violent fantasies as well? Are you on Horror boards bitching about the torture and murder? If not, you really need to question what it is about you that you feel the need to over compensate here.

Quite well written, even if we have a different idea of "reluctance". That was rape, and the fact that she changed idea does not make it less rapey

Great story

I hope you continue this story - so very hot. I wonder what her fate is, and if she gets fucked a lot more then at risk, or gets fucked until the test turns positive.

I so love your peg risk stories, especially if a bit non-consensual as when the baby is unwanted the risk can be even hotter, like extreme sports such as skydiving.

Please keep up the GREAT work!!!!!

Another good noncon story I can recommend for both you and your readers is "CO Leep" (https://www.literotica.com/s/co-leep) - if you like that one as well as Tara's Breeding, please leave a nice comment for the author.

Overall? Fantastic story, incredibly hot, though i tend to prefer my noncon to not do the switching to loving it halfway through thing. Thats a personal preference tho. Only real feedback is that smucking is now my new least favorite onomatopoeia word for anything, just.... not sexy, only gross >_<

But seriously a fantastic read

my last filled comment Is one of truthful carnal desire. I'd collaborative Sarah's place right now simply shocking fucked three gorgeous men, as each one of them first fed me with his thick beautifuly veined dick as I licked & sucked his beautiful thick & meaty manhood of a lolly pop to my absolute hungry pleasure as I swallowed his delicious cumm so eagerly and still kept on sucking and licking him until he became hard for me again so he could take me for his own as he's pumping in and out of my

hungry pussy for as long as he could fuck me silly, leaving me fully satisfied.

Oh man this was one of the best reads I've experienced on here, thank you!

hobey! Was hot, hot, hot! See there, you've got me repeating myself(repeating my self!) But that's OK, because the story was so excelent!!! Poxsibly the 2nd best I've read on this site!!! 5*****!!!

Yomeyo

Overall, I liked this story a LOT! Totally my fantasy to be ravaged by 3 super sexy, well-hung men...preferably wolf shifters, lol!

I do however, have questions & some constructive criticism. My absolute FAV genres is shifter erotica, romantasy, paranormal romance, ect. Having read thousands of these type of stories, I knew immediately when the guys used the word “breed”, that that’s what this story entailed. BUT, since there were no other clues given except for in Tara’s thoughts & when Roy bite her neck to “claim” her as his, I think most people are going to be confused about what’s going on. Especially if they’ve never read shifter erotica. It would have been nice (imo) to have included more details about these men-Are they shifters & if so, what breed? Also, Roy kept saying that this was just the beginning of their fun, but there was only the 1 encounter for each man in the story. I wish there would’ve been MORE explicit details & included scenes where they all used her body at the same time.

Because I love this genre, I do hope to see a continuance of this story. Other than the few things I mentioned above, it was a great read.

Three or four guys was my fantasy. My husband and I had fantasies. We acted out several but I couldn't figure out how to do a multi partner with out hurting Steve. Then one night while at a company party I had been drinking and dancing with several different coworkers. Steve at the last minute called saying his boss demanded he stay over to help complete the job they were on Steve was very upset I was upset. He said he would try to make but wouldn't make any promises. I guess I really had been drinking to much because I ended up in my room with three coworkers when the love of my life came in the room and to say the lease was madd. I don't know how but he beat the living H___ out of the three men and left saying saying his lawyer would be in touch. I was trying to stop him but he wouldn't hear me. He and our four children were gone by the time I got home. He filed for divorce and custody having me served at work also sued my company. He got everything he asked for. I felt he really treated me very well with very lenient visitation. Also very kind financially he had brought a lot more into the marriage than I had and he split everything fifty-fifty. I ask him for forgiveness and couldn't we work this out someway because I knew it was a stupid mistake but I blamed it on to the alcohol and him not being there. Also it was a one-time thing that I really wish we could work past it he good even go out and have a fling with another woman. He said that he had already forgave me but trust was the issue and did I really think that him going out with another woman would fix things why not three at the same time he said also two wrongs don't make a right! About a month later our son had a banquet. One night while we were talking when I was dropping the children off he asked if I would like to attend the banquet with them? I said I would love to go as a family. We had a great evening then about 2 weeks later he actually asked me out on a date I answered him immediately that I would love to. About another month later he asked me to marry him and I needed to be sure that I was okay with his children that kind of hurt but I understood what he was saying. What he meant was that he would remarry me but under the circumstances that the children would never be hurt again from her actions and that there would be a prenuptial agreement the prenuptial agreement was pretty simple if either spouse cheated on the other that person that cheated would walk away without anything. I agreed immediately and we got married again. Later I ask which date are we going to celebrate our anniversary on? He said this date because he lost his first wife due to infidelity. Life goes on things did work out but it took a long while for me to build his trust back in me.

What a story. The attention to detail really fleshed out this story. Loved how Tara went from a semi frightened girl to an all-out slut pushing back against the men as they filled her cunt to overflowing. Tara definitely had the time of her life.

good but still rape

One of my favorites to get myself off to yum. Especially since so many of these types of stories are from the dude POV which is a bummer. Ladies fantasize about naughty things too, even if most of us wouldn't do it IRL and would probably taser or key-stab anyone who tried this without our express consent.

I think you'd get fewer "it's rape" comments if you put in one of those disclaimers I see a lot on this site's noncon stories, the "this is a fictional story/fantasy it is not condoning or encouraging rape in real life" ones. (The story is labeled noncon they ought to have figured out that it wasn' t consensual but people are what they are.)

Great story see more just like it or this one continued

Out of breath myself !

That girl got converted alright !

At last, someone who understands the importance of describing the ejaculation in detail. So tired of stories that say, "...and then he came inside me," and that's it for the climax. Thanks for stretching it out.

I can't find the link to it now, but someone posted it over on Wattpad. As I am not the copyright holder, I couldn't get it taken down, but if I find it again I'll post the link so you can get it taken care of. The poster grabbed a bunch of stuff off Literotica and posted it in violation of copyright laws, and Wattpad's own Terms of Service, so I doubt this is their first rodeo with theft.

So jealous of Sara's experience,would love to participate in this type of sexual activity!! Please continue this writing, look forward to reading much more,tJoYry

This is a fantastic story! I hope to read more just like it!

I was bred by my daughters dad, I use the term bred because we fucked four and five times a day to conceive her, I loved the feel of his cock stretching my pussy to its limits and then some. He was 9” and 5” around. I let him take me any way he wanted, rough, hard, and being held down while he pushed his cock into me. I was pregnant within two weeks of the end of my period. He started filling my pussy the minute I stopped bleeding and continued breeding me all month long to make sure the pregnancy test wasn’t negative. I liked it, I liked having him fill me with cum. He fucked me hard till the day our child was born. The plan was to breed me continuously for the next several years because he wanted a large family and I was good with being bred and being a mom. He moved and got a job that took him on the road a lot so we just had the one, then he started seeing someone so we stopped dating due to distance. But if I found a guy that wanted to keep breeding me, I would let him. I love a guy filling me with cum and I love kids. My former guys cock kept all the cum in. He would sleep with his cock inside me to keep his cum in and fuck me during the night as well. It was nothing to only get a couple of hours of sleep and be filled a few more times. Nightwolf1995@hotmail.com if your in the mitten state 😉😋

I just love been breed n am jerious of Tara cause she gets to keep all of them to herself n gets breed again

Came twice while reading

Totally hot. Lucky Tara. Now she admits what she craves she'll be much more happy, and better stuffed :) Give me 3 big strong guys and I turn into a total sub

If these guys read things wrong, just once, they'll get hauled off to jail or murdered.

That was a story well written and written with much forethought. Forget the fact that in truth it was no less than rape. It was erotic, descriptive and packed full of subconscious lust. One of the best stories I have read in many years.

My pussy's dripping cuz of this. Truly a well written story.

My foot is still pulsing as I type this review. I'm such a fucking whore!

This is the best story on Literotica. I try to read it every Summer.

I wanted to be one of these men. There's nothing hotter than supermarket competition. It brings out something primal in men. I love the bite and claim before the final breeding. So hot. My wife's about to get bred again. Thank you!, as will Allison.

Loved it…thank you for writing!

I absolutely love this story!!! Made me cum so many times!!!! Keep up the good work. Love xx

Can I please have a part 2 this was so good