by uh-oh
story: *labeled as non-consensual/rape*
people: *bitching about the rape elements*
dumb as shit
Enjoyed reading this. If you read through older comments author posted that it is on smash words for the story. Very good read. Depends on what you like and read for personally. I enjoy the strong alpha male(s) going strong and authoritative taking their female. Breeding or at least unprotected to be filled with his cum is a turn on as well. Hot sex is also a plus to read with thick dick. The biting and claiming was also a plus. Worth reading.
it the unrealistic thing ive ever read, plaese put a disvlamar abaut that because there are some people who dont have the maturity to understand that.
I absolutely loved this story. I would have loved it more had the woman been black.
A good story, for the genre, It would have been nice to read a sequel, first to see if Tara invited the Movers back for a follow-up impregnation, and the later to see how she would enjoy getting her mouth and ass filled with cum when her belly got to big for comfortable fucking! Thanx for the Read.
A little disappointed Roy didn't breed her ass then too! Maybe that's the 2nd breeding.
I absolutely love this story! Because I really get into white man-blk woman non consensual, I wish Tara had been black. That would have been perfect.
Tara Bridges has really falling down. Now she'll have to swim across a river of cum
Ma bbc wanna cum again. I love when a girl is taken against her will. so! Fucking! Hottttt! Dominant, animalistic demanding, don't give a shit and Young adult females wet dream is that true definition of daddy. Job well done, but not the cum in ma balls lol
Love it so much i wish to be her but on pills .
Milking four men inside me .every night so many night so many night like this i don,t want to be pregnant but raw sex .
I read this story and send link to my husband and he ask me if i like it i said yes i love the story .late evening he come home with 2 m friend of him .and they all fuck and suck my pussy .thanks for writer i enjoy the same sex like Tara .and i hope it will continue .now i m so tierd with sore pussy but love it .
Love this story ,read it so many time and cum every time I wish for next part
No rape story will get more than 1star from me. No is no always and discase a no with a yes is just huge wrong on my book
The pacing was really on point, the author clearly has tons of writing experience and knows what he/she is doing, and I love this overall! This is my type of erotic lit. However, a thing I think you could have done better is describing the looks of our female protagonist so us male readers can visualize without using our own imagination or pictures.
Yes, it's rape. But a few more chapters could get Roy on one knee making it legal, with the promise the two other guys could have her occasionally. By the time she ready to pop, she's a married woman with two boyfriends that stop by 2 or 3 times a week to fill in for Roy because he is being fucked to death. They just keep breeding her. She's one of those women that's body recovers right after she delivers. Eventually, illegally, she marries the other two as well. She ends up with six kids, 3 dad's, in a big home. Keep writing.
And then she says "fuck this shit, I'll kill them and chop their cocks off "
A fabulous story. As a fellow author, I know what goes into creating stories like this and I commend you. Great work. It would be nice to see a sequel. Five stars.
Complete garbage, anyone that gets off writing or reading about rape should be removed from the gene pool.
I came so many times reading this book,I have a rape and breeding kink and fantasy,I really need some dick to help me our rn.
Gotta love thise who come to the NON CON/RELUCTANCE category and cry rape.......-_- ummm......NON CON!!!! This story was a scorcher!! 5 stars!!
Guys stop being pissed over the content of this, it clearly states it's non-con. The writer isn't supporting it in real life, just using it as a basis for their FICTIONAL writing.
Well, written and engaging story, whether or not people like the idea of non-consent, or not. For those who do, it was a great read; for those who dislike the premise, why are you reading it in the first place? Just move on to something you do enjoy…
I love that I stumbled upon this! I have a major breeding/impregnation fetish and this gave me everything I wanted and then some. I am a writer myself and thoroughly enjoyed this erotic and arousing story. The illustrative words describing insemination, the visualization of her egg being fertilized, it was a masterpiece! I must read more from you.
I absolutely love this story. The guys seem to be unaware of the fact that so many women want to be raped in their fantasy. In reality they don't want to be raped, they want to be taken with passion by a man they are attracted to. This is exactly what happens in this story. She wants them but can't allow herself to offer herself to them. Because no woman can do that and if she does she is no longer a “proper” woman. She loses some of her feminity. Very arousing story, great suspense, great descriptions, wonderful humor. Nailed it. I love this author. I love the idea of “real” sex and impregnation. Thank you for this great story. My favourite of them all.
Ps how do some male authors describe the woman's sensual experience so well!? I could never be able to tell how things are from the male's perspective, congratulations!
Wonderful. I get why they all had to cum in her pussy, but I would have loved to have them all inside her at once, a DP and blowjob before they all creampie her pussy would have been perfection. Loved the nonconsent and rough fucking.
One of the best story's I have ever read. I loved imagining myself as Tara. Keep up the amazing work.
This story has staying power: 2012. Wow. And it seems it is as appreciated now as it was then. Outstanding.
What a load of fun I would love to find out if Tara ordered the pill or another session with Roy and co. Perhaps she should take the pill and become unpregnant after all she could do the same again a couple of weeks later, how about a follow-up soonish, yeah even 10 years on .
I love breeding stories. But I generally prefer that man...or men who benefit are the husband's buddies or competitive coworkers.
You got me so hot and wet .. it's difficult waiting for my boyfriend to return .. at least I have my dildoes 😁
That’s super hot. The fa t the guys were so dominant they forced her submission out of her. Super hot
A reality many white women have succumbed to. They object for some time but eventually they want it again again and again.
The best of your stories. Extremely erotic.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!! But if she wants all those 3 again, she must be a real slut. She should be satisfied with Roy. She's doing the right thing, taking the morning after pill. Now she can have a long term relationship with Roy, and get impregnated by him as and when she wants it. And by the way, the past tense of drag is dragged, not drug.
Loved this story! Bred is how I want to have my sex, unprotected and hot, hard cock sinking as deeply as possible. Filling me, taking turns, over and over! It gives me an orgasm just typing this! Please do write more!
Halfway through she found the high-resolution black-and-white photographs she adored, the ones with a pair of red lips barely touching the head of a stiff cock.
Didn't read it did you? How do red lips appear in b&w photos?
Hot Hot Hot! I loved how Tara kept swinging from reluctance to acceptance, over and over, in this rhythmic game of sex. The author really captures the feminine psyche with this fantasy... That's what I think anyway. Powerfully erotic! Definitely got the juices flowing! 5 stars
Very erotic story. Yes they raped her but I can’t help but feel that she loved being fucked so thoroughly by all three of them. I can picture her lying on her bed, the sperm dripping out of her. Swollen and beautifully fucked hairy pussy. How about a sequel where she is pregnant,, extremely horny and gets gangbanged.
Fucking delightful. African sperm is so God damned strong willed that the slimy semen can inseminate and impregnate white sluts even via anal sodomy, by penetrating and swimming through her colon into the vagina and from there into her innocently pure womb. Black men are that fucking strong, and I know its for the best that my wife Stephanie is breeding Blackened babies instead of my offspring.
À really good jerk read for any porno addicted perv...I'm past my prime now but was a bachelor my whole life and with all the cocks and pussys I mastered.never found a woman like that man I'm disappointed...still dam fine read..
So hot! I wouldn't mind being in Tara's shoes for a day. Excellent story, excellent writing!
Rape justified because the author says that, in the end, it really turned the woman on.
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The issue here is NOT whether this particular woman enjoyed it or not, it's the male fantasy that this type of behavior is reasonable because a woman MIGHT find that she enjoys the experience. What is missing is any comprehension of the hideous brutally of the rape that has been committed The emotional horror and trauma that results in the overwhelming number of cases in which she is violated against her will is ignored.
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Suppose a man was attacked by a gang of me who proceeded to brutally and
repeatedly shove a broomstick up his ass without any type of consent. Ir is possible that a few men might find they enjoy being brutalized in this fashion. The focus, however, should remain on the horror and trauma that would result for those men who did not and were twisted and horrified by the experience
TREMENDOUS! Thorough buildup of the men, of Royce...and then the plundering she knew she wanted from the three of them THEN AND NOW!!
Good story about the conflict between lust and what the mind knows to be best. Tara chose lust. I'm glad that she has the sense to use the morning after pill.