by BrianCaster
Extra point amusement factor. Read story, wondered bot generated? Prose- writing software need work on.
Has problems with english m'thinks........ Read like crap
I wrote a story for literotica that was a major work of prose compared to this..and my work was rejected....why wasnt this impossible to read garbage?
I assume it was written for an Indian readership rather than me. All the omitted pronouns certainly point to Subcontinent English.
Yeah plus the writer has been deleting the comments. Grow up dude. If you can't take criticism for this piece of shit, then why did you even post it? Rewrite it with proper english and maybe we'll be kinder. In its current state it is unreadable.
I love that all us pornophiles had such an issue with the quality. It's porn for god's sake, not a masterpiece!!!