All Comments on 'Teacher's Pet Ch. 05'

by Erlikkhan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
It's GREAT to see you back

It's GREAT to see you back! I've enjoyed all of your stories, not only those posted here, but elsewhere (which manage to make up your complete list, I think).

It's GREAT that you gave an end to this story. I hope that doesn't mean you're finishing up last pieces to just fade away forever.

Which ever it is, I hope you have a good life and take care.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow!

One of the best I have read of late. Your style is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Yeah!

So good!! I'm really glad the Daddy got in on the action with Katie in this chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wonder-rrific!!!

Your style is great. Your story line is great. Your possibilities are limitless---more, more, more!

Kitty_SenpaiKitty_Senpaialmost 17 years ago
ok

YOU SICK SADISTIC .... WAIT, i need to clean up the puddle of cum i left on my boss' leather chair ...right i was saying ... you are soooooooooooo sick ... and i enjoyed every minute of it...

you made wearing no underwear and walking with my mini vibrator more worth it than ever :D

Thank You

god i love your style of writing...

TheCarverTheCarverabout 14 years ago
Holy Shit!!!

That is one of the hottest series that I have ever read. It fit so well together that even the incest factor was a turn on.

hotman_45hotman_45over 13 years ago
Wish it wouldn't end it is so hot and sexy

You have the gift. You kept raising the bar and making it hotter and hotter without losing the excitement. The incest with Dad swallowing the mixed cum from his daughter while being ass fucked by his wife was the tops! I've never read a better series any where - THANKS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I was so turned on the whole time

I love this series. I was turned on the whole time and had to pleasure myself, many times while reading. I like it rough and nasty myself, hard to get it like that when you are a woman though. You are so talented please continue with this series, it's so HOT.

Thank you

L

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sometimes.....

Sometimes a writer doesn't know when enough is enough! I think that applies here. You should have ended this mess after the third chapter it may have saved the story. But you got caught up in yourself and the story became boring long before this mess ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Childish

a boys absurd fantasy - and not well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow

I don't like anal, incest, or a ton of oral sex. Excuse me while I go ring out my panties.

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlover 11 years ago
Worst chapter

Sorry but WHY did you have to involve the father ????

Just made it really weird and shitty - if I could give a minus vote I would give MINUS five stars on this chapter - the other four were beautiful

Sarah

ThemaskedmanThemaskedmanover 11 years ago
Why?!

I know the last chapter is supposed to be a big finale but it would have been a great chapter to just have the mom and daughter with Carl. Delete the anonymous black guys and the pussy husband

sassysasha89sassysasha89almost 10 years ago

Make Carl fuck O'Keefe's ass while he fucks his daughter and make the professor ride Carl's cock facing away from him as the girls share a doubled ended, fucking each other and themselves at the same time.

Also have Karen get fucked at school where she works and is respected. He takes pictures of her like he did before in her classroom. He promised the school's security guards a turn in exchange for silence.

She discovered that her husband took Katie out of school early and didn't return until late or the next day. Katie promised Carl a recording of that night where the professor fucked Katie in numerous positions and a couple of hours later, he was spit-roasted by a couple of men, sucking one man's cock while another fucked his ass, as Katie did three cocks at once, Carl and.the other men took turns fucking the professor's ass as he fucked Katie's cunt and ass, while professor fucked Katie's cunt, he went alternated between their assholes, professor rode Carl's dick while sucking another dick as he continued to watch his daughter get fuck by several cocks.

Meanwhile Carl took advantage of the empty house and had Karen completely to himself. He fucked her everywhere in the house and even outside with other men. He photographed her everywhere in the house. When Karen returned home, her husband and daughter were at it again in the master bedroom, their clothes in the kitchen and Katie's panties left on the doorstep along with a large dollops of her father's cum.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Plz continue

Continue the series plz. Carl continue control over his teacher makes her his slave n marry her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
shitty.

Definitely the worst in the series, only carl fucking katie would've been enough, but no. you had to fuck it all up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Delete your account.

Delete your account.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
continue

awesome series. ignore the bullshit bad comments. plz continue

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
you missed out on being the 'sex god' you think yourself to be Carl..!!! ;)) coz obviously you never heard or knew that 'variety is the spice of life'!!!

Didn't mother and daughter have flooding orgasms merely by watching high school 'sex god' Carl drive into their driveway?!!! ;)sleazeball jerks and assholes a huge turn on?!...since Mister Carl says so,right?! ;)

its good you ended off with this chapter..coz your sex scenes were over repetitive cruel and mere copy paste versions of older sessions!! ;)

moreover you do not have erotic writing art to stick around in non con, as you need to drag in a disgusting incest in large parts of the last chapter,and keep that dragging on and on and on....!!! incest and taboo a different category!! ;)

for the fussy,self important 'i'm a sex god' whom every woman would submit to ' feel, Carl needs to at least have variety in the sex he offers....which.....obviously the miserable scum of the earth does not have!! ;) never heard 'variety is the spice of life'?!! ;)missed out on 'sex god'ism this time Carl!!! :(( ;))

Marquis007Marquis007over 5 years ago
Amazing story

This is easily one of the hottest incestuous stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
continue

plz continue. this is one of the hottest series. plz continue it

bullworshipperbullworshipperover 5 years ago
Hail, Student Cock!!

I admire your Teacher's Pet series very much: erotically detailed, arousing to read, and very satisfying sexual adventure. What an alpha student!!! Love it. Thank you.

HotForLitHotForLitover 5 years ago
Good story

Personaly, I didn't like the rape part, there are more mental ways to my like.

Other than that, very good! Shame you had to stop this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please revisit these Characters.

Awesome story. Would love for you to revisit this. Maybe a little time has passed. Hopefully Katie got knocked up the first time Carl took her. Mrs. O'Keefe too! There is so much more to tell. Thank You.

princesslyzz13princesslyzz13almost 5 years ago
A Craving for Cock

I love all of your work.

But I miss a Craving for Cock series. Is there any yous be reposting it?

Love your work,

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You should be aware of copyright

Even the drivel you read on the latrine walls, in the gloryhole you service, is copyrighted.

Just drop it. Keep your McJob, lick your mommy‘s drenched panties in the basement you live and dream of the cocks you so much crave.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You threw to much crap into this towards the end. About the only thing you missed was Carl pissing on them.

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