by restless insanity
I hope this writer keeps on writing. Her stories though good now will become red hot dynamite with a little more practice. She has a natural sense of story crafting. I love the way she took her character through the emotions from lust to fuilfillment and love, then betrayal, and finally ended it with her acceptance. The sex was great too. I didn't catch myself pausing over mispelled words or gramatical errors like I often do on here, so I commend her for knowing her language as well.
What a truly erotic story! It got me very hot, even more so because I had a similar experience in college. We never got past the oral stage, and I knew he was married, so there wasn't the pain you felt. Reading this, though, made me feel it for you...
Keep writing.
"Logs, which had once been trees ..."
is one of the DUMBEST fucking "sentences" I've ever encountered.
I loved it one of the best stories I've read in a while I hope you continue to write it was really really good.
I love your writing. Do you write from experience or fantasy? Keep it up.
Good story, had its ups and downs. Keep writing you'll only get better!
I thought it was good, nice length and plot. A little more descriptions of the sex and it would definatly be a 100%
Wow, that was good, but I being a terrible romantic, would have prefered for them to get married, have kids, etc.
Good story, but i thought it ended a little weird. She's hurt by her lover, then gets over him with masturbation?
Hey, i loved this story! one of the best i've read. it really helped especially sinse i am in love with a former teacher of mine. only i wish they could have been together in the end! one of my favorite lines was “Don’t worry baby, we’ll sizzle!” it was hilarious!!!!! A+++++
This was a great story, but I would have taken that rabbit and burned it in spite Lol