by One_Two_Nine
No matter what you call it, shit is shit. This story, in fact, turned INTO shit when you started adding disgusting feces and urine. At least a scientific argument may be made that urine is sterile (if still disgusting), but shit and piss aren't topics that turn me on. Quite the opposite, in fact.
Sick, sick, sick. Put this in fetish, and keep it there.
I liked the story up to the pont of introducing shit, then for me it turned to shit. Maybe writing an intro warning readers of the the content would better prepare your audience. Incest and a little bdsm suits me fine, when it comes to scat, I gotta leave. There are readers who seem to like things such as this, so please continue with your writing, just warn us as a courtesy, please.
about shit eating! That is about as fucking gross as it gets! I'd say wash your mouth out with soap, but I think it would be better just to lobotomize your brain! I can't beleive anybody would actually get turned on by that! You have to be one sick mother fucker! Seriously fucked in the head!!!
Part 1 was so nice to read but you fucked up in part 2.
I mean really who in there right mind does this shit.
Urine is fairly harmless but shit is full of bacteria and very dangerous.
So if you wanna write about scat play please do so somewhere else.
This site is about loving and erotic stories not shitting in someones face.
Okay, this story kinda turned disgusting after you added about shitting on people. D: fucking nasty....
Thank you. Super sexy and hyper erotic. I don't know what all the fuss over a little bit of shit is. I mean, sure, it tastes like shit, but what do you expect, it is shit.
Incest aficionados are such delicate little flowers, so easily upset by the slightest thing. You just have to keep in mind that writing for them is like writing for children. You have to be so careful what you say or they'll throw all their toys out of the playpen.
I think you wrote a really nice story here and I for one loved it. Just one thing though, I think you mean 'Mmm' rather than 'Mum'. 'Mum' is what the British call their mothers.
I'm going to post this comment anonymously because I learned in the past what a vindictive bunch of wankers some people can be, revenge 1-bombing your stories because they don't agree with a comment you left and stalking you ever after.
That turned me off so badly. I almost wanna never return to this site!
Shitting into Someone's mouth.. wtf????
Yuck yuck yuck