All Comments on 'Teasing on The Bay'

by JackFlash1959

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
LOVED IT, 'HOPE THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER

Loved it! 'hope there's another chapter waiting in the wings 'coz it would be a cryin' shame not to make a follow up..!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
We have winner !!!

Excellent! Very well written with just the right amount of character development to get me to understand their motavations. With just the right of spice to keep it exciting.

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