All Comments on 'Tee-Ball Mom'

I don't get it.

It's a fuck story, plain and simple. Not a bad, either.

Gee.....you must take something to help you sleep, that or you re-read your kind've a sex story. lol It it good enough to read twice.

wife sure doesnt. Hey guy she crawled you for no reason and very quick to have unprotected sex. What to imagine how many other guys she has done this with? Want to guess how many of them had STDs or AIDS or both? Want to know what you are going to be doing monthly for the next year? A married woman can be safer to have sex with than a single woman. But only if she isnt fucking every guy in town. How does it feel to be another notch on her bedpost?

Apparently you are using the KISS principle. I like it!

Some writers get it, most don't. A simple erotic story is more fun than the ponderous psychological studies that often pass for erotic stories on this site.

You ain't Shakespeare, but you entertained me for 5 minutes.

Short, simple, and right to the fuckin' and suckin'!!

You sure made me feel like I was there! Wow! Keep writing! Great job! I need a Dawn in my life!

ok for a short story but other than sex there wasn`t much going on. no

reason for the sex.was she a slut and he a man whore?

Divorce you helped create and the extended stay you had in the hospital and rehab center?

You ill come too, when hubby slams a T ball bat up your ass.

And recovered by the police who were at her house talking to her husband who was really pissed at her.

You know, it gets really stupid when you use exclamation points on every line of the 'conversation ' there. Not that it wasn't lame to begin with, but you need some help...