All Comments on 'Teen Cure'

A bit hurried for the telling, but not a bad first ever story. Keep on writing.

More dialogue would have made it come alive. Including during their sex.

I thought it was a bit short on the sex side too when i finally read it on here, but encouraging advice i'll try the next insert soon.

not a bad first effort, more details in the sex though, gotta good story going through it too. let us know when the 2nd is done :)