All Comments on 'Tell Mommy What You Want'

You're good at this,I hope there's more to come.

I love the way she told him to ask!!!!

Awesome story, if only a little short. It felt like it had more potential to exploit, but the story was good and hot. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

Great story. One of the best I've read here. I had a difficult time hiding my erection on the train while enjoying it. Look forward to seeing more from you.

but you could benefit from the services of a proof reader.

or I just need a translator. for example, what does this mean?

"It was almost four in then, the air heavy. I was standing at the patio door in my nightgown, the garden completely darkened."

You took a often used scenario and gave it new life. I felt like I had never read anything like this one, before. Not an easy task. Keep up the fine writing.

5 stars. For a brief moment Ryan became Jack but otherwise great story

Brilliant! Excellent writing.