All Comments on 'Temptations Ch. 04'

Great fourth part! I loved Gingers taking charge of things. You gonna write part 5?

A hearty congratulations on a job well done! Worth the wait. I love the new twist about Kenny wanting his son's cum. Keep it cumming, I mean coming! But, please, don't wait quite so long!! I was going insane!

Great writing ! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter ... hope you are doing it !!

the story was about mom and son getting it on.why take away from that and bring the father and the teacher more problems.

Your last Temptations submission was in February of '05. It is now August!!

PLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSE write and submit part 5. Don't abandon such a good story.

It's been a year. Chapter 5 soon???

Please explore Kenny's subconscious desire for his son's cock. The hospital scene did nothing but detract from the well written, long and drawn out seduction you have built up.

More please. We havern't forgotten!

the special night was for ginger and nick.

I see that you have returned to continue one of your other stories. Please continue this one. I've never forgotten it and have been checking it regularly ever since that last chapter was posted. PLEASE continue it.