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Click here"Loved... in the past tense?"
"Yes, Sylvia, in the past tense. I have two new wives now, and all my emotions are tied up in them and my daughters. And now young George, of course. I'm afraid I have very little... time, left to dwell on memories. Emotional or otherwise."
"I understand, George, and I'm really sorry that I was so stupid. I know Rose is as well, by the way. But hey, we're not having a bad life of it. We're celebrities you know; bigger than film stars!"
"Look, I'd better go and chat with Rose and your new wives. You and Douglas really should be spending as much time as we've got here with your sons. Handsome boy isn't he?"
I nodded.
"Takes after his dad. Christ, I hope he's got your brains as well."
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They'd stayed with us until late in the day, but eventually Sylvia had to press a button on a little gadget she had with her and all four of our visitors almost instantly vanished; whisked away back to the future.
That night I found myself wondering whether I'd ever see my son again. Ciera and Chaise both sensed that I was... well, feeling a little melancholy.
Termini Capitulus V
Just perfected the machine? Uh, time travel. Once it's perfected they could go to any time.
First mothers huh? How about that. The honored sluts.
Return to the basic family unit? Wise but unexpected.
Really a helluva story. Waiting till the last one but I'm sure it will be a five.
the details are being filled in and the people are acquiring personalities.
good job.
The ending has yet to be clear to me - will we just get some answers or is there more on the new ideas front for these guys -
I get the feeling Sylvia knows how truly she fucked up and knew that day she went skating - she may not have been on what she was losing but she was clear she had thrown it away -
The logical structure of the story is excellent.