All Comments on 'Ten Minutes to Midnight'

You nailed this one for sure. It flowed and carried me along for the ride. Try to make the next one a little longer - not all roller coasters are the same length.

Your story left me with smiles and a deep feeling in the pit of my stomach...it was really sweet..and tender..

~Honey

As you know, also, be loyal forever.

Gorgeous love story with the vivid imagery that we've come to expect and be spoiled by.

One sticking point - Any time the narrator is supposed to be an American and the spelling isn't, it sticks out at me. For a couple of brief moments I lost my suspension of disbelief.