All Comments on 'Tennis Camp Ch. 04'

in the room with this chapter. You can feel the emotion.

Very well written!

Great story good action I like your characters only one small quibble you have an anachronism with your statement at the beginning of the first episode you stated that this was a flashback to a time when 18 yr olds could drink legally then in this episode have viagra not a big thing but it does distort the sense of this being a fond memory of years ago i can't wait to see your next post

liked the cheat sheet at the top