by Manofthehillpeople
While this story is very long, it is super hot. You know it is rather difficult to read with only one hand
hey i really loved this story and i was wondering when you were gonna post the new chapter and it was great through all 4 parts
Picked this story line up trying to find good family stories. Bit winded, but great story.
DO THE KIDS DO THE MOVES
DO THE PARENTS GET TOGETHER
PLEASE FINISH IT LOVED IT
i love the stories but where is more. It has been awhile. I want more of the family.
I DO HOPE UR GOING TO FINISH THIS-
BOTH HOUSEHOLDS @ BEACH
GIRLS @ SCHOOL W/ PARENTS
DAVID W/ GIRLFRIEND W/ PARENTS
PLEASE FINISH
This story is fantastic. Can not wait for the next chapter.
Hope you will post it soon.
Some people said that it was long winded, but I disagree...I think that you did fabulous...I was just wondering if you were gonna continue the story to include both families? If you are having second thought, please let me assure you that you have avid readers on the edge of their seat waiting...
come on man make chapter 6. your story is just to good to end now.
That I must say was one of the best continuations I've yet read. Loved it and I hope to read more!!
Great series. Please keep series going. Unlimited combinations
SERIES IS BASICALLY FUN...BUT SINCE THIS FAMILY IS SO OPEN-MINDED..HOW ABOUT GETTING ROBERT AND DAVID INTO SOME HOT MALE FAMILY BI WITH TERI AND KAREN AS PART OF IT..PERHAPS DAD AND SON ENJOYING EACH OTHERS CREMEPIES...ROBERT GOING AFTER KAREN'S CREME ON DAVID'..ETC
I loved it!
It did me a great favor. LOL!
Keep up the great work!
I like your stories, but your writing is not good in places. I don't like the way the families keeps having little family chats in between. Its a bit cringey, and why does everyone always have to come together...with lots of it that always seems to end up dripping out. Your story line is brilliant, but I think you need to vary it a little bit.
it's very sexy. i'm just disappointed there's only 1 more chapter left - and the writer - who is terrific - hasn't posted in a long time - so i guess this next chapter will be the end. Too bad - this story has legs!!!