All Comments on 'Teri's Vacation Ch. 05'

by Manofthehillpeople

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Big_MacBig_Macover 20 years ago
Super Hot

While this story is very long, it is super hot. You know it is rather difficult to read with only one hand

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
i love it when will there be more

hey i really loved this story and i was wondering when you were gonna post the new chapter and it was great through all 4 parts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
great tale (tail) hehehe

Picked this story line up trying to find good family stories. Bit winded, but great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
NEED MORE

DO THE KIDS DO THE MOVES

DO THE PARENTS GET TOGETHER

PLEASE FINISH IT LOVED IT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hey wheres the rest...?

i love the stories but where is more. It has been awhile. I want more of the family.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
PLEASE FINISH

I DO HOPE UR GOING TO FINISH THIS-

BOTH HOUSEHOLDS @ BEACH

GIRLS @ SCHOOL W/ PARENTS

DAVID W/ GIRLFRIEND W/ PARENTS

PLEASE FINISH

Xman72357Xman72357over 19 years ago
Great Story

This story is fantastic. Can not wait for the next chapter.

Hope you will post it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I want more!

Some people said that it was long winded, but I disagree...I think that you did fabulous...I was just wondering if you were gonna continue the story to include both families? If you are having second thought, please let me assure you that you have avid readers on the edge of their seat waiting...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Dude awsome!!!!!

come on man make chapter 6. your story is just to good to end now.

Lillian2YungLillian2Yungover 18 years ago
Absolutely Wonderful

That I must say was one of the best continuations I've yet read. Loved it and I hope to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Keep it going

Great series. Please keep series going. Unlimited combinations

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GOOD..BUT

SERIES IS BASICALLY FUN...BUT SINCE THIS FAMILY IS SO OPEN-MINDED..HOW ABOUT GETTING ROBERT AND DAVID INTO SOME HOT MALE FAMILY BI WITH TERI AND KAREN AS PART OF IT..PERHAPS DAD AND SON ENJOYING EACH OTHERS CREMEPIES...ROBERT GOING AFTER KAREN'S CREME ON DAVID'..ETC

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very, very hot!

I loved it!

It did me a great favor. LOL!

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A female opinion

I like your stories, but your writing is not good in places. I don't like the way the families keeps having little family chats in between. Its a bit cringey, and why does everyone always have to come together...with lots of it that always seems to end up dripping out. Your story line is brilliant, but I think you need to vary it a little bit.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
i'm enjoying this series

it's very sexy. i'm just disappointed there's only 1 more chapter left - and the writer - who is terrific - hasn't posted in a long time - so i guess this next chapter will be the end. Too bad - this story has legs!!!

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