All Comments on 'Terror in the Snowstorm Ch. 01'

Overall, this story is good work. The single largest flaw is the complete shift in Tara's attitude and personality. Rather abruptly, she went from snobby rich bitch to pragmatic psychoanalyst. Entertaining piece of fiction. -- KK in Texas

You have dialogue, you have plot, but your character-building, esp of the woman, is weak. Keep reading and keep writing. You'll get there.

You really had me all over the emotional spectrum. I have to agree on the character development, as commmented on previously, but this is a great read.

I really hope you keep submitting here. Your work is truly enjoyable.

Great build up with right amount of all the ingredients. Look forward to the next chapters.

Really good! - But why was Seth so slow? He did react like a moron! 5*s.

k

Good start. A little brutal but expected.