All Comments on 'Terror in the Snowstorm Ch. 03'

what a beautiful fantasy!

That was a great third chapter that you wrote. I like the way you described the sex between Seth and Tara. I also loved the story line with Tara's parents and how they have taken a liking to Seth and want to help him. I hope you write another chapter of the story with Seth's parents and Tara's parents together with the kids.

I loved the first three chapters. Please be quick with the next chapter.

Beautifully written, wonderfully descriptive. You have involved your readers in the lives of these people, but especially in Seth's life. You hope he gets everything he wants, and deserves. I need more from you. Please don't keep me waiting.

Page one of this chapter blind sided me somewhat. It really made me think about my own father whom we lost 6 yrs ago and the morality and honor system he tried to instill. Looking back on my life (as a mechanic also), I have always treated all on my contacts with the outlook that they trust me with their vehicles, therefore, they are owed my best. My life has always been Pay It Forward. I won't have anything to speak of for retirement but I go to sleep at night knowing how many friends I have. You also write a mean/hot sex story.

Great chapter. Tara's parents seem too good to be true but it's a beautiful romance. 5 stars