All Comments on 'Terry and David'

Dinsmore -- when I see your name listed in a day's new offerings, I know I will be treated to a well-written story. Once again I was not disappointed. Thank you for this and your long list of stories. Bravo! Take a bow.

What a well written story, just enough "heat" to make it interesting. Well composed. Thanks, I enjoyed it..

If you ever watched the JAG TV series this rates right up there and reads like the real thing. Terry is a killer lawyer with almost a photographic memory for court proceedings. An exciting story and one that was really enjoyable to read. Dinsmore does it again - not that there was ever any doubt.

Well written! Enjoyable!

Excellent story!

Boyd

This is an effort not to give you a big head as one of the top writers / Authors here - so I won't.

Thanks Author - you are appreciated

Dinsmore,

The style of this one is different from your norm, and I love it! Thanks for another great yarn from the master!

again!

the win against all odds story is very inspiring

I'm impressed! It read very well, and seems to have a bit of personal knowledge to it. It was intriguing, and though I was hoping for another romp, I was equally enthused about the truly happy ending. Congrats on a great piece.

Please add more chapters!

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love most of your stories. Happy endings do it for me. What do we do when we have read all of your stories? Please write more.

Another pearler. Thanks

Good plot development and enjoyable romantic outcomes. Liked that the main charater was nice to his lovers and exceeded the high school behaviour norms. All charaters were well portrayed and made for an enjoyable read.

It wasn't an unexpected ending for me. I wanted it to end just like that... and it did. The writing flowed beautifully and I enjoyed the detail and colour.

Good, good stuff.

A man who can see past the rumor and bullshit -

A woman who knew she wanted out and how to get there -

The chance reunion to make it fates idea - all to the good -

Once again my theory that any story with a woman's name in the title can't be any good, is shot down in flames. Great Story. Possibility of a sequel??

The correct for an attorney is counsel, not council.

Quite nice

...from Dinsmore.

Not only an impressive story line, but expressed in near faultless language (lacking misspellings, grammar problems, etc).

Mentioning grammar, reminds me of one I heard decades ago. A little boy opens the door. Salesman asks, "Where's your mother?"

Little boy replies, "She ain't here."

Salesman: "Where's your grammar?"

Boy: "She ain't here either."

Paul in Oklahoma

I came from reading Molly Was A Teenage Whore,

thinking it was about as good as it could get.

Wrong.

This story went beyond it.

I don't know why I'm attracted to legal drama.

I have no familiarity nor expertise in it.

Come, to think of it, maybe that's why -- the lure of the obscure and fascination with unknown ( which is sometimes not as fascinating once the mysteries are explained).

The first listing on the Submissions page of Rehnquist (a judge)

is another fascinating courtroom drama.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Paul in Oklahoma

Great drama/love story. Another example of the authors great writing abilities. I thoroughly enjoyed the story but as one other commented a sequel or at least Epilogue would be wonderful. Again another 5 star story.

It is great to read a story that has an interesting plot and is not dedicated to endless descriptions of sex. Great job! 5*

5*****. 11 years since I first read this. It certainly has not diminished. Excellent!