All Comments on 'Terry's New Job'

This kind of crap?

No, readers are not expected to believe this wonderful story, they are expected to enjoy it. First it is non-consensual, which better be not true stories; second it is very obviously straight fantasy. Yes, the White Slave trade exists, but not in major casinos. If you don't like this category, don't read it.

grab an encyclopedia. This story rocks.

get excited over this stuff

If you deal with this as only a fictional fantasy story it is one of the best. The girl finds her natural place in the world. But it does leave a question as to what eventually happens to the girls and whether when they are retired they are thrown away, terminated, or given a very nice package to live on for the rest of their lives. In this case, I would assume that around age 35 if they are not seriously diseased or injured they would be to old to compete with much younger girls who are hostesses.

and very well told. Fantasy, fiction, erotica, damn good entertainment. Some how - it all fell into place. Thanks. Rad'l

The author clearly lacks even a rudimentary understanding of human psychology. Other than prisoners and men in deep need of a highly trained therapist, this has no audience.

I can only second Rad'l's post. Great story, extremely well written and highly erotic.

The psychological aspects are only supporting the story, especially at the beginning. Her acceptance is too fast but it's fiction, isn't it?

It's fiction! And as a female reader, damn good fiction. I loved this story. The taunting, humiliation, and condescension she experiences are extremely well worded and thought out. I loved every paragraph of this story. I hope the author writes more exactly like this.

Unbelievable - in both senses of the word - which just goes to show you don't have to believe to be aroused. Really liked the unpretentious story-telling style. Good stuff.

Where can I get a job like Terry?! Hot Hot Hot

It is my kind of story and I enjoyed it very much.

I do hope that you will continue writing and posting

stories on Literotica. Thank you!

Clearly the author is male yet he has managed to write a story that largely allowed me to empathize with Terry. I would have loved for the story to be longer and to have Terry's angst and internal turmoil expended upon. I would also liked to have seen a longer time devoted to her denial, anger/resistance resolution and acceptance phases. This story is virtually on a par with many professional stories. Perhaps collaboration with a female coauthor would be in order. I loved the story and hope to see a lot more stories written by Iron_Butterfly

Is there another part to this story?

Female reader here and have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this story!!!

Good story, pretty horrifying to think of a world in which that kind of thing might happen to someone.

The main characters of these stories always disappoint me, though. I can't imagine what kind of mental defect you would have to be born with to actually enjoy being treated that way.

...but regret the author never wrote another tale!