by Softly
The terms of alternate incarceration set the stage for unhampered abuse of prisoners. Sloan was lucky, had she been placed in bondage to someone else, she could have easily found herself raped, murdered and reported as an escapee.
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Other than those issues with the premise it is a nice story. It would have been nicer if it had been a little longer with more dialog and non-sexual interaction between the pardon and the proposal.
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<I>-- srgeek --</I>
It's gentle, it's kind, good natured. We haven't enough of that.
John
Budapest